Lucky to Live in Paradise
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Waking up to the sounds of birds chirping
As the cool island breeze sweeps into my room
The warm Hawaiian sun beams through my window
I stretch with great intensity and let out a few yawns
My feet are warm from the comfort of my blanket
As my body lays restless on the queen sized bed
Cars pass by here and there
Each with their own unique sound
The barking of dogs can be heard in the distance
As the morning becomes noon
I rise from my bed and make my way to the door
As I open it, the sound of the TV comes into play
My parents are enjoying NFL Sunday
They greet me with smiles and comforting words
I take a deep breath and exhale all the stress
It is a great day to wake up in paradise
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