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Marissa and me will be together till eternity


It's always me and that one girl; everyone hates to see us coming they might as well roll their eyes or throw a chair at our faces but that's too bad because their friendships won't ever last. Marissa and me will laugh and turn and people will hate and walk past with weird looks on their faces but that's too sad because when Marissa and me are together that's how we'll act. It's been long since I've seen Marissa but oh how I wish I could see her all the time even If I saw her everywhere I go I wouldn't be annoyed. Marissa and me will hug in the halls and look like we don't care about anyone around us and that's true we already know it all. Marissa will always be there to agree or disagree that sometimes she will even roast me but it's okay because it makes me feel sane. With Marissa everything is possible even when I don't want to do my work just bring her in and in a few moments all you'll hear is chatter. Marissa and me will be together till eternity pulls us apart even though everyone knows we'll find ourselves once again.
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Katiecreates

Hello fellow readers I'm Katie I love writing poetry and writing stories about small things that terrify me and things that are most important to me I hope you love my poetry and are excited to see more that I have to offer! "Good people go through bad things even when they haven't done anything wrong because that's just how the world is"

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal, autobiographical friendship narrative centered on speaker's bond with Marissa.

SparseMeasureDense

Single core idea—friendship with Marissa—repeated across seven stanzas with minimal conceptual variation.

DarkSentimentBright

Overwhelmingly positive celebration of friendship despite mentions of others' negativity.

StillEnergyExplosive

Declarative assertions with moderate intensity; passionate but conversational rather than explosive.

MicroLengthEpic

Seven stanzas of varying length, approximately 16-30 lines total.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Minimal ornamentation; mostly plain declaration with sparse metaphor (eternity pulling apart).

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; first-person intimacy expressing speaker's feelings about Marissa.

Free Verseidentityloverepetitionpersonification

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