Me vs. I

Fri, 12/22/2017 - 11:46 -- Eviek4

Drift…

            But not too far!

As far as you can…

            It’s dangerous!

It’s beautiful…

            You want to die?

To finally live… 

This poem is about: 
Me

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eaglesore1

Go....

           and don't look back

have joy.....

          and don't be sorry

love.....

         like its your last day on earth

work hard....

and work smart....

work to reach the bar.

work 

give...

        because youll some day need

give freely

             give not because you want something 

live, work hard, have joy and work hard to get to were you need to be before you know it.

 

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