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Menace

by ppadmin

I move on tracks like running backs smoke niggas like 20 sacks get bent like hunch backs any questions just ask why, what or where nobody can compare stay hot like my name was Texas electric chairs
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jwiener
You used a number of similes in this poem, which is a great technique for poetry writing, because in addition to telling your story, you add figurative language to make it have a bigger impact.

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