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Message in A Bottle


A message in a bottle Thrown out to sea Hoping my soulmate will find it And come searching for me A message in a bottle Filled with many hopes and desires Praying that one day They all will transpire I walk the beaches at night My mind wandering aimlessly Wondering if the one I love Will sweep me off my feet gracefully All alone knowing that Words will never be spoken Because our love is separated By a tremendous ocean A message in a bottle Left this very shore Tossed out to sea So that love will be lost no more Thoughts of you How can it be? When I have no picture of you Painted in my mind visually Will he think I’m crazy Or just crazy in love Or maybe he’ll think I’m heaven-sent Like the angel Gabriel from above Too many days have gone by I long to feel your embrace Wrap my arms around you And forever share the same space Without you I feel an emptiness in my soul Me plus you Will make this broken heart whole This letter has traveled the raging waves Tossing and turning God will bring us together Because your love is what I’ve been yearning I dropped a tear in the ocean And this here is true The day I find it Will be the day I stop missing you A message in a bottle Thrown out to sea Hoping my soulmate will find it And come searching for me
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Comments (13)

livinonaprayer
<p>I was taken on a journey. Beautiful story and poem</p>
Darshika
Aww, i can't believing i am awwing but this was really beautiful. I feel you girl :')
Unspoken_beauty
<p>I loved this piece! it was so beautiful &lt;3&nbsp;</p>
carissas.creations
<p>This is so lovely. Keep searching and waiting....you&#39;re not alone.</p>
ACME
<p>Beautiful poem, very heartfelt! Lovely job! :)</p>
Colorless
<p>I love how you ended the same way you began, it fit very well for this poem and wrapped everything together very nicely :)</p>
Indigo Rose
<p>Beautiful</p>
behindtheseams1715
<p>That was very beautiful. You've left me with memorable imageas and emotions.</p>
Ellavader
This flowed together beautifully! I loved it!!
Ceimeinar
<p>Perfection.</p>
savigirl14
<p>Really amazing poem</p>
greeneyes
<p>Love this (:</p>
BenMaes
this is beautiful. I enjoyed reading this. thank you

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