Midnight
I only have one memory of you;
us, on that winter night,
you, in my arms, at the place of your birth,
where you would forever rest
in a shell of your mother’s sable fur.
I ran my fingers across your raven coat,
as you gazed up at me
with those golden, beady eyes.
You were a tiny, vulnerable creature,
in need of comfort, and safety.
I hope that, when you shut your eyes forever,
on that fateful night,
you had the presence of someone at the shelter:
someone to hold your little body--
to cradle you,
to cherish you, and give you a makeshift home,
when I couldn’t be there to say goodnight.
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Deeply personal memory of loss, minimal abstract philosophizing.
Single sustained narrative idea developed meditative and slowly.
Bittersweet grief and regret, tender but predominantly melancholic.
Quiet, introspective, mournful tone; minimal explosive or kinetic language.
Approximately 26 lines; falls within 16-30 line range.
Metaphor, personification, sensory imagery; ornamental but restrained style.
Pure lyric internal voice; intimate first-person memory and emotion.
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