From milk to yogurt it went

Location

10032
United States
40° 50' 27.5352" N, 73° 56' 41.2764" W

From milk to yogurt it went,
Doubling the traps everyday,
Like rat trapped in the edge
Wishing to be somewhere else;
Becoming an ocean of tears
Where a little hole in the wall
Gets smaller every second
And when it finally gets completely lost
There’s no reason to keep trying,
But you are like you just got married.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

amazing poem
continue to write and expand your ideas

llopez1024

thank you! I will

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