Mind Body & Soul

April 29, 2013

Mind body and soul your heart is made of coal through all the love and hate my mind has a hateful trait you knew my body inside out always made me shout you knew what was right and you always kept it tight i gave you my all it made you stand tall now we are over and my pains are sober our friendship is strong and i hope it last long there will always be love but our relationship will rest like a dove

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ashley_fattieApr 29, 2013

this is about a relationship that i once had and now is over but now we continue to be friends... i wanted to show everyone that you can still be good friends with an ex.