Mine

Take me along for the ride send me deep into your swirling tides
I want your grip to keep me in the instant of falling but don't give way
Let your cool breath drown me and your warmth keep me
Push me and pull me
I want to stay alive but feel myself dying
Like a flame that won't go out
Pull me inside like candle wax
Melt me down to nothing but ash
Blow me away so i feel gone
Hold it tight when i'm almost leaving
Give me instant healing
Tie my hands so i can't feel
Go ahead you're the master
Spin the wheel

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