The Mistake
it's not your fault love
you didn't know
the ice looked strong enough
but then again so did your arms
who knew that both you and the ice
would give
under the weight of my mistakes
I guess the burden was too heavy
but alas, I was a fool
you said I could trust you
so when the ice broke
and I feel through,
I knew your arms wouldn't save me.
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