misunderstanding love
The lips of hers are nothing but flesh
As diamonds are rocks
As a dollar is paper
What meaning is value without one who gives it
When lover meets maker
When sinner meets taker
her lips are priced as rice in famine
Value resides no not in a thing
But created inside the mind of a being
I utter I love you, but what good does that do
The passion equate, but for me it is true
I know not feelings but mine
You have yours to that I am blind
Nor any 2 lives have ever seen through
Not double of pairs but eyes single as two
You lack to look out of my eyes
or walk in my shoes
So feelings exchanged are never equal
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