A Modern Desdemona's Lamentations
To My Modern Othello:
I fell hard for you;
I’d fallen to the ground.
Yet somehow, simultaneously, we defied gravity
And our force could never be bound.
We had so much in common!
With you I spent my time.
I heeded not my enemies,
For I believed it to be fine
But they filled your head with poison,
I swore it wasn’t true.
But despite all of my pleading,
You let the lies asphyxiate you.
And I had thought you loved me!
Was this not the case?
How then could a love like ours end in such haste?
Then you claimed it wasn’t so,
The poison was gone from sight.
I saw a glimmer of hope,
The promise of new light.
My dreams were shortly crushed,
I guess I knew it was lie.
You let their poison slither inside of you,
So I stopped trying…trying to try.
Now I feel gravity,
With new chains I’ve bound.
A piece of me is still in you,
And it will never be found.
I want to say it was no fault of yours,
But that is an obvious lie,
These are YOUR tears that stain my face,
YOU made me cry.
Now I keep my distance;
I still keep my space.
They have stopped poisoning you,
Yet I can’t bear look upon you face.
Othello, it’s your Desdemona.
The years may go by,
But I’ll never forget
The poison that made you blind.
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