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monster


a little girl being beaten by her father a little girl being molested by her father's friend same child looking for love became the little girl lost she exposes herself only to be riducule by group of guys internally, she felt like a monster like beauty and the beast guys took advantage of her vulnerability in which she became a feast rejection became a disease that turned to the life of prostitution lifestyle in her vantage point was an innovation that became a revolution trying to look for employment in which employers feel she belongs in a mental institution in her lost and sorry eyes, that was normative until a guy sexually violates her like rights in a constitution that was the last straw not only she broke his jaw she shot and killed him feelings of attraction for guys turned into hatred that was the defining moment that she became known as monster every guy she encounters, they became victims of her rage although she was young, trauma that suffocated her state of mind made her feel older than her actual age it became a killing spree every victim that was killed, all she did was drive the victim's cars and flee when she was finally caught, she was arrested a witness identify her as the killer in which others attested nobody didn't know what she has to endure in her life as she was handcuffed and heading to the electric chair she advocated something that struck a nerve in hoping someone will care you are sending a rape victim to death row in the judge's eyes, she was a serial killer. that's sad, it becomes an all time low
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<p>thank you for the feedback</p><p>what part you felt was a little off? this is a poem that came from the movie monster starrting cherlize theron, which by the way won best actress for that role</p><p>watch the movie monster-everything that occurred was bizarre so perhaps maybe the way i wrote it might be lil off, but it&#39;s powerful because of this individual&#39;s lifestyle-it was ideas i picked up</p><p>again. watch the movie and read my poem again-tell me what you think next time around</p><p>check out my other poems i wrote</p>
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<p>i really like it the flow was a lil off but the poem its self struck a past the i wrote out a long time ago and reminded me how far i really have come. the emotion you truely can feel it thank you so much great write</p>

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