Monterno Achilles
Mother wanted a strong boy
though he never asked it
wanted to be normal boy
dipped him in River Styx
result is rebellious
always throwing damn fits
one day said good bye to mom
suitcase and a jacket
joined the war
angered mommy
signed for camp
and paid no fees
fell from high
no injuries
then got up
onto his feet
went onto the battlefield
and bullets bounced off of his chest
his friends then called him superman
his friends and more called him the best
cocky feelings
rose up high
like an eagle
in the sky
he looked on down
and saw food
friends meant nothing
to him too
one battle later
his "friends" were dead
the enemy then
surrounded him
they shot and shot
and he still stood still
then one bullet grazzed
his damn exposed heel
his face was in shock
and fell to the floor
his enemies spat
he cocky no more
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