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A Moon Surrounded by Stars


She shines bright

Like the moon

Stars twinkling

In her eyes

 

And yet no one sees

That those stars

Are starting to

Collapse

 

One by one

They blink out

Of existence

 

All of those 

Stars

Being smothered

With the absolute

Darkness

From her grief

 

The only parts

That remain

Of those stars

Are the tears

That fall from

Her eyes

 

Once those stars

All near collapse

She’ll shine brighter

Than ever before

 

Because a star

Shines at it’s

Brightest

Just before

It dies

 
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