The more i thought
I dream upon the daffodils
in a dream swept rain,
dreaming all the things i can
and forgetting all the pain.
for it’s early morning
‘bout 6:30 or so
as i lay in my bed wide awake
dreaming about
how i was dreaming
of daffodils and rain
Then i thought:
why was i dreaming about the dream
of daffodils and rain?
and proceeded to get confused
‘cause every time i tried to think
of why i thought of something,
i kept on thinking about why i dreamt
of what i was dreaming.
and the more i thought of this
the more lost i got,
at this point i wasn’t too sure
whether i was dreaming or not.
Then i started rolling down a hillside
all damp and wet with dew
smelling all the daffodils
as if that dream came true.
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mrapook
I am from Miami, Florida and have written poems throughout my life. Some more prolific than others. I know this site is for young poets and writers, but i am young at heart with a little more life experiences. Since we all have been locked up in our own induced prison for awhile, i thought it was about time, since i have so much of it now, to gather all my writings and share my life with you all. Topics that i cover will be, "Mother Nature" "life" "Friendships" "Love" and "Some stories and Thoughts." I have loved art all my life, especially photography and graphic art (my profession, love designing logos and studied at the art institute of Ft. Lauderdale) and ceramics. I wrestled at light weight in high school and won a national award for one of my ceramic vases. I have gone through many rough waters in my life, which one of us hasn't,? which you will read when i post them. I fantasy roll play, play card games especially Poker, and i like board games. You are welcome to follow me on Facebook if you are so inclined to snoop through my pictures and my life. https://www.facebook.com/mitchell.abrahams.77 or for my poetry page "Me Myself & i" fb.me/mrapook I also belong the the "AllPoetry.com" website. Hope you enjoy my poems
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