the morning after

by MVP-Most Valuable Poet

January 30, 2015

our love for each other is endless

our desires to satisfy needs is relentless

our warmth to entice stimulation are breathless

think of us as a banana

you shield me of diseases and germs form the outside

as you peel your legs wide open

the head of my banana slips right in

nice and smooth

as i penetrate hard

you scream my name loud

as i penetrate harder

you scream my name louder

as i penetrate the hardest

you scream my name at the top of your lungs

climaxes are at its highest peak

my banana softens, and mushes

you sleep quietly on your side

i caress the warmth of your body radiating to mine

we sleep peacefully

next morning

we wake up

with bad breaths and all

we kiss each other good morning genuinely

take a shower together intimately

and look forward to a brand new day

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MVP-Most Valuable PoetFeb 25, 2015

it'll be an honor to look at your workthank you for the support once againhere's a thought, how about we collaborate on a poem togetherwhat do you say?

42596tayFeb 25, 2015

so deep, you really paint a picture with your words. I would really appreciate it if you could read some of my stuff and tell me what you think.. I've been writting for a while now, but I would like some pointers and advice if you have any to offer. I really like your style of writting by the way. Thanks in advance.