Mortal Eye
Celestial beings understand me
When you ask me
“Let me see through your eyes”
I will tell you
Before you see through my eyes walk my line
Breathe through my body and understand my mind
Take a tour through my veins; through my flesh
You will understand why life is vain – a frail test
Praise the precious blood; life-giving source of vigor
Shrug off the mental adversity with a cup of liquor
The daily hassles; make the picture in your head real grainy
When you’re a mortal, the path ahead is always shady
Take the next step and fall through a crack
Our future is controlled by another, out of grasp
We live with the fear of being taken out, shaken out –
Poking our heads out of the hole; is it safer now?
We worry plenty.
Any time we’re off our guard we’ll be buried empty.
Fear keeps us alert; our feet on the ground, nice and flat.
Fear usually runs through the fingertips to the spines in the back.
We act and ask questions last,
Don’t let it rack our brains, focus on the task –
We are mortals and we never try to mask the past.
Yes, so you wonder what we “fight” for
What we “die” for
What we “live” for
What we breathe for
Many motives there are, let’s settle the score
I’ll gladly bleed so my seeds can eat
Vengeance and reimbursement in the darkest crevice
I’ll shake their world in two, good riddance
We humans need closure, put up a wanted poster
I want the vigilante dead when midnight speaks
His crimson entrails spilled on the city streets
Take him by the hand and show him the trouble he caused me
Why do we do this?
Maybe because justice lags and the gods couldn’t give a damn
Leave a man to rot in the eternal chasm is the plan
Leave us fester in our own trouble is what the gods surmise
So now you have looked through a mortal’s eyes
But I’m not done
You don’t know what a mortal sees in his dreams
Keep the paradise in better view, but wake to the world ahead of you
Cause every day we pray and kneel
Cause temptations follow prey at our heels
Many motives there are, let’s settle the score
Think about the rules, because you made em’
But what happens when you must choose an ultimatum?
We humans make that choice every wake
What must a man do for His name sake?
The path is real, but it isn’t easy
I have to steal so my daughter gets to see me
I carry steel so my son will never need me
Understand a man if you ever met one
To you we may be only ants on your spectrum
I’ve met my time, next in line
The Grim Reaper holds my sign
I’ve met my time
Keep the lines going
The gods hold my sign
Keep the lives growing
This is why every man cries
Look through a mortal’s eyes
The higher beings, I call to you; hold my sign
Understand the words of a man; not of divine
I’ve met my time, next in line
The Grim Reaper holds my sign
I’ve met my time
Keep the lines going
The gods hold my sign
Keep the lives growing
This is why every man cries
Look through a mortal’s eyes
The higher beings, I call to you, hold my sign
Understand the words of a man, not of divine
Written by Thorne McFarlane (Fatal Dawn)
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