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Mother ,Father, How Do I Feel


A symbol of hope that seems to diminish 

A life giving so much, yet resources exhausted 

A Fighter, mighty and a hero, yet vulnerable to the harsh cold that comes ahead 

So beautiful giving light a full new meaning 

But thoughts caught in her mind 

Anger of million kinds 

Dims the brightness out of the lightness in such a beauty mother occupied 

those hatred, those train of thoughts, eating her heart , tearing her apart 

the start of tears dialuting her georgousness and beauty matched by none 

there she welcomes the sickness, good bye health its gone 

 

she stumbles yet keeps standing alone in bewilderness all she's got, she is giving 

encompacing all responsibilities to which is to a father 

exceeting the limits one can aid given the title of a mother 

but this title alone can not discribe her 

for she has given much more then what is engulfed in that humangous title 

how many times can she stumple yet stand ? 

fighting, being a hero, sheltering her life's achievement against the harsh bitter cold 

so i repeat 

she is a life giving so much yet resources excousted 

 

so how does one feel 

when the symbol of hope bringer of happiness and life its self is thrown in the eye of a hurricane 

but as the hurricane moves danger awaits 

but this hurricane is not like other hurricanes 

at war it puts one in an abbis, a dark place, in turmoil and a near distruction 

with out meaning it couz it too for the one has an strong affections 

It too's love is like unbreakable bond lives on internally, infinite in its grace 

Wants to make the one fly 

Soar through the sky 

And never let him fall 

Never let him go 

This hurricane at times of happiness does not oblivate everything in its path 

Rather obtains the strength to build them at that moment it’s cleansed from its entire wrath 

Yet, as its children grow 

They’re threatened by the name its self, a hurricane 

And when they are told by the symbol of hope, they too will be like it they deny it, yet, 

Want to be couz they see the other side how much life it’s given 

They want to be as famous as he 

Ask anyone, do you know what a hurricane is? 

But when the name is misleading 

Does not show all the times the one it was feeding 

That it too's life's achievement is the one, you resent the name couz it says other wise 

Thus coming up with one wise conclusion, you deny it. 

Remembering all the times that it was him

That made the brightness out of the lightness mother occupied dim 

Yet at the back of your mind you find that it too is a victim as well 

And not it's threatened; his life's achievement is to be taken away 

 But what is worse is the one's symbol of hope is it too's symbol of hope 

And now feels she is being driven away by monsters lurking in the shadows 

Enemies that do not want his family to strive nor survive 

And the one will see him as the big bad wolf 

So it too's live is on flame, so is the mother four times as he 

But what about the one 

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I am a boy,who has much love for poetry, Goes insane looking for every word that rhymes in his head, Expressing him self in writing, Trying to make a living in other areas and careers But as hobby, Who can ask for better love then poetry!

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