Mother Sun
The lady of the first sun,
Hesitates to let her first world down
That’s all she relies on
All her life she had dreamed of raising this world
Her people look up to her,
While she cares and provides her heat
No one can defeat this Mother Sun,
Because she is the diamond sparkling in the warm skies
Astronauts make sacrifices to get one gravitated step towards her
But if they get too close they turn to ash
She is powerful enough to know who she loves,
And who she needs in her life
She is the queen, she is the beauty,
And she is the unbreakable soul,
Full of adventures and wise lectures
And love for her people
Mother Sun wears a crown of flames
To match her unbreakable bond with her children
Her children who aspire to be like her,
And sit on her throne
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