A Mother`s Love

Fri, 04/12/2013 - 22:27 -- Nakhil

The tears, the years, the hurt, the fears, the lies, the ties, the days and goodbyes. And then the light shines through its you, all the rough times that you've been through. You are still my sanity, inspiration, and song, but you're more than that, you are my son. They say that mother and child are bonded at birth, I knew this to be true the moment you dropped a tear on earth. Your heart breeds love and your spirit seeps strength, I need you to know that I will love you past eternities length. After all I've said I don't think you understand, that I will always be there to hold your hand.

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The tears, the years, the hurt, the fears, the lies, the ties, the days and goodbyes. And then the light shines through its you, all the rough times that you've been through. You are still my sanity, inspiration, and song, but you're more than that, you are my son. They say that mother and child are bonded at birth, I knew this to be true the moment you dropped a tear on earth. Your heart breeds love and your spirit seeps strength, I need you to know that I will love you past eternities length. After all I've said I don't think you understand, that I will always be there to hold your hand.

 

can you imagine if more parents were to tell their child/children this

this is a very warming and inspiring poem that emphasizezs the importance of love to a child/children

 

keep writing-poem blew my head away

kaywhy22

Simply beautiful .. A mothers love, there's nothing like it!

Write Right

Absolutely beautiful. :)

savigirl14

perfection

Faith and Ambition

Beautiful

always reaching for success

That's beautiful I loved every bit of it.

Jan Wienen

So very special ... Thank you for helping me to understand my wife so much better 

eshaarais

love it.. relateable..

eshaarais

beautiful.. that love is very special

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