Mountain Flower
I told her
You’re a mountain flower
She said, I am?
I said yes, you have
a sweetness about you
She said I do?
I said yes
Then I knelt beside
her bed
so we could see
eye to eye
She looked
conspicuously
at me
tilting her head
ever so gently
I looked at her and said
a mountain flower
blooms
whether someone notices
its beautiful colors
or not
A mountain flower
has a fragrance
that no one ever smells
and yet
the breeze blows
its scent through the hills
joining with various
flowers, trees and aromas from the surrounding mountainside
creating a bouquet
that delights the senses
Then she looked at me
and said in a whisper
I’m a mountain flower?
I nodded, Yes
Then she smiled in delight
as her dimples danced
across her face like
the golden arch of the sun and I was blinded
Her heart soared
though she struggled
to straighten out pieces
of tissue
on her blanket
that covered her
incapacitated arm
She
was
a mountain flower
And
I was blessed
to have taken time
to notice
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