Muddy

by BaileyBreese

April 1, 2016

There are muddy swamps

In autumn swamps are infested

Crocodiles like swamps

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Comments (2)

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk GudaMay 11, 2016

<p>Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  </p>

mrs earlApr 21, 2016

<p>I have a few questions. the poem seems to be about autumn and then about swamps and then about crocodiles. Which should be the focus and how do you think you could create the focus in the poem?</p>