Music

Mon, 08/05/2019 - 17:51 -- Kyra V

When things are going wrong,

Put those problems into a song.

When we are alone, 

Singing makes us feel at home.

 

If you are too sick,

Just listen to music.

If you have a frown, 

Take it off by wearing a crown.

 

If you don’t see the end of your troubles,

Sing a song and they'll pop like bubbles.

If you don’t see the light,
hang on but don’t give up the fight.

 

When everything’s going wrong,

Put those problems into a song.

When we are alone,

Singing makes us feel at home.

 

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

Nate’s_the_name25

The poems is really good and the rhymes help make it flow well, but I think you should completely delete the second stanza, maybe maybe replace it.

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