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the music beating loudeveryone dancing


the music beating loud

everyone dancing along 

then soon everything getting to wild

when they heard the sound of the gun they knew something was wrong

 

bodies everywhere

more than most people can bare

pushing shoving to escape not playing fair

your curiousity tells you to look back and you accept that dare

 

blood wide eyes and screams breaking through the air

walking crawling running

stepping and tripping upon a dead pair

hidding  and jogging

when death lingers in the air does anyone around care

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Iḿ M, I like reading, writing, cooking, acting, and helping others. Good luck to other poets out there, and never give up on your dreams. No matter how hard it seems.

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