My Beginning
I feel cold; I'm suffocating.
I cried as loud as I could.
I didn't know that "outside" was bright.
Why does everyone look so glad?
It's unfair! I'm the only one who feel sad.
Before I realized,
I was crying as loud as I could.
I feel empty; I don't feel comfortable.
I don't have patience, so
I cried as loud as I could.
Why are you crying?
But you are smiling.
Are you happy?
I reached your cheeks;
Sorry.
My hands were too small to stop
the trickling water from overflowing.
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