My brother has Fallen

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07424
United States
40° 52' 52.2192" N, 74° 12' 43.4268" W

(So many years in this,
Everyday I’ve lived to kill
But when one of my brothers fall
Another war has begun.

I don’t know how to act
When my heart is lost
He was just like me
But now no longer just like me,
I am here

He fought the devil
And now he’s lying next to god
Protected in his arms
But what is there to do
When my brother is gone?)

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DavonJ

Nice poem, I can relate to it because of a situation with my grandmother. Keep your head up. Keep living your life.

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