My Conscious You

January 11, 2023

My conscious you:

How do I get rid of you my entire life I have searched

Never finding the answer I beat the path and begged the universe

One day during a drowning submersion in a coat

you said to me in a loud voice

Your life's experiences, your decisions because of me

have cut your path

Your thoughts have brought

what is to be

I'll make a deal with you one you'll hopefully accept

You'll have to be relentless to reach the next step

I like holding you back I love the same old space it's comfortable

ya know so you'll have to go against the grain,

retrain me, put me in a new place

Only positive thinking only mastering your thoughts

is the only sword to cut through what cannot be bought

Start right now next time I appear crowd

out my voice with the opposite of fear

It won't take long maybe a few wks even tell me lies-

I will believe

Whatever you desire-tell me you already have

I don't know the difference between the truth and a lie

Pretty soon our reality will have no choice but to conform,

the negative will be dead and a new you will be born

Best- your subconscious

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