My Dad
AGE 5:
My dad is my best friend
correction... was
He makes me laugh to no end
correction... made
He makes mom super happy
correction... made
AGE 10:
Mom told us the other day that dad was going away
but he would be back soon
he couldn't forget about us that fast
correction... shouldn't
AGE 13:
Mom has a new husband
He's awesome to us
He is as fun as dad is
correction... was
AGE 14:
This is the first time we have seen dad
its been a couple years
but it is nice to see him again
correction... was
AGE 15:
This lady likes dad a lot
he does weird things now too
but he still notices us
correction... noticed
AGE 17:
I havent heard from my dad
its been two years
but he cares about us
correction... cared
He has a new religion
a new family
but he loves us
correction... loved
AGE 17 (now):
I miss my dad
He doesn't talk to us anymore
but he is my bestfriend
correction... was
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