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My first glimpse


 

sitting here alone

in this empty room

never have i opened my eyes until today

you forced them to see ...

the shell has begun to crack 

my protection towards the world has been torn

and i ... am awakening

...

it turns in this void

in silence

it wraps anything in its path

it's light

it is joy

it can be swallowed by fear

it is a part of you

it is the source of all

it is your soul 

the breath god blew into everything and everyone

and i just opened my eyes

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