My Flaw

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Life can be beautiful

But for some people it can be brutal

 Leading their voice to hide

And to become shyness bride

And lead them to hide in books

Not concentrating in looks

She wishes to be like every other girl

But shopping just makes me want to hurl

Shyness is her weakness she wish to change

But talking out loud for her is strange

Her whole nerves come to live

That she can barely survive

Shyness it’s her only flaw

But she can’t stop and its on bah

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