My good fellow
My good fellow, you are a fool.
You shine as bright as th' sun
Yet your head is as an empty cave.
One can! ~ ~ ~ yell in!
Your! ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ left!
Ear! ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ and!
Hear! ~ ~ ~ ~ ECHO!
ECHo ~ ECho ~ Echo ~ echo!
My good fellow, I mean no harm,
Please take no offense, dear sir,
But you are most positively a fool!
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