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My Life Experience


The day like any other day, finally got to go away. This was my first time going there, the beach, the palms, the summer air, I did not know what to expect but when we arrived 'twas perfect. The castle, rides, and Mickey Mouse, the cotton candy, and fun house. It was the best time of our life, we then saw Mickey Mouse's wife. The next day was very dull because, we ate some sour applesauce. Suddenly, day turned right side up, we ended going to Epcot. At night we got to go see lights by far the best of all the sights. Riding home was one of the best, flea markets, souvenirs, songfests. The pirates, and all the sea foam, so sad we had to head for home.
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RebeccaYSPerez
<p>I can&#39;t wait until it&#39;s my turn to go, my family is so excited! I love how you write about it and made it so cute and fun. I can&#39;t say just how much! I hope you had a great time! Tell us about the next one too, okay?</p><p>Becca.</p>

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