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My love


I see you when I close my eyes I miss you when I opened my eyes My heart beats calls your name While my blood runs with your love We were in love with each other Until the devil day come God to away you from me But forgets to take me with you You may having comfortable In heaven with beautiful maidens But iam here in this world Suffering to death I wish I am one of those maidens To make comfortable I wish iam one of your sparkles That make you charming
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Patali
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