My Perfect Paradise

October 17, 2017

If you were under these trees Lying here next to me That would be the perfect night Everything would be just right By the water and under the sun When the night has just begun That would be the perfect night Everything would be just right I gaze into your gorgeous eyes That are the color of the morning sky That would be the perfect night Everything would be just right You're my arms, you by my side Nothing to lose, nothing to hide That would be the perfect night Everything would be just right The night would be incomplete Until I listen to your heartbeat That would be the perfect night Everything would be just right This would be my paradise Nothing else would suffice Only you would make my night And everything would be just right

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I enjoy sharing deep connections with the world. Whether it be by writing, talking, creating any kind of art, ect. I'm a lovely Scorpio so when I feel I feel deeply. In order to have an outlet for all those deep emotions I write it out or paint it out. A lot of what I write can be dark but I promise you will feel something as you read. A lot of struggles Ive been through has brought out the writer and painter in me. I'm passionate about what I do. I also have some lighter poetry or songs about love and life. I just love to share what I write with others that really appreciate it and who also write themselves. I would always appreciate any thoughts you may have and constructive critisism...that's the only way to learn and get better, Anyways, I hope you enjoy what you read.

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