My Precious Angel
When you came into my life it felt as if I smiled for the first
And when you started talking to me I thought my heart would burst
You had the biggest and most beautiful smile
And I could just stand and talk for a while
When I had to go it felt as if I would die
When I finally got home I almost wanted to lay down and cry
But now that you are with me I realize one thing
I found my true Angel and I need to hear her sing
Plz give me feedback I'm only 16 andi don't know if this is any good a yes or no is fine thnx
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