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My Remedy


While others see my naviety making a way for trickery,

You see it making a way for your wisdom to be.

While others despise my youth,

You use me to speak truth.

While others are empty, afraid, at a stop,

You fill me from the bottem to the top.

While others fake love; ignoring their loss,

You showed me true love when you died on the cross.

While others say I'm worthless,

You say I have a purpose.

Without you, God, I am nothing.

 

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Zachary Harris
<p>Good job portraying God&#39;s perspective so well in comparison to man&#39;s! Keep writing!</p>

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