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my response to the moon


I thought all i wanted was you

And i was right it was true

Because everytime i look into those eyes

Those eyes that shine like pretty blue skies

I feel happy,full,excited

And maybe yeah im far sighted 

But even without my glasses i see how you shine oh so bright

Please let me be part of your life ur knight

Knight in shining armor

The moon told me dont take her for granted dont hurt her dont harm her

And if you just let me try i promise i wont hurt you

Cause i know i blew it the first time but all i have to tell the moon 

Is i know i wont because i love her

 
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