My Role Model

Wed, 01/08/2014 - 18:35 -- Jenny

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She's like a rose that grew out of the concrete.

My light in a world of confusion.

When she opens her mouth to share her knowledge, Its the greatest gift.

I liisten, I take in, I keep what she says forever.

I think, I rethink, and turn her words around in my head,

Because no one's advice is more important to me.

She's staright forward with me, whenever I ask questions about church, school or boys.

She does not lie, or encourage me to do wrong.

She inspires me to be the best.

The inspirational hold she has on me is indescribable.

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Jenny

I really love my two role models, and they mean the world to me. I just enjoyed writing this over all, as I sat back and let the memories flow to me.

Joyc273

Jenny, I LOVE your poem! This is EXACTLY what I would say about my role model! :)

Jenny

Lol . thank you. Its really great to have someone to talk to.

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