My Rose Lou
I compare thy love to a rose,
its finest smell
too great for my nose
thy could take me to hell.
With thee I could even end up in heaven.
Thou art my leader.
Thyself takes me where I've never before been.
With you, here present in my heart, I will never need a heater.
My home has space for two.
What is mine can be for you
my bed even too.
Just for my beautiful Lou.
So I ask: Will you marry this poor man?
Will thee give me thou's hand?
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