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My Savior God


I tried to take my own life because I wanted to disappear;

Who could blame me, I was a victim of bullying.

I was told I was twig and that I should go back to preschool

Because I was skinny and I look like a child,

Words really does hurt.

While hiding my pain with a smile, you were the only one who knew,

You knew how much I have gone through,

With countless nightmare of being abandon and my bullies hunting me,

You were always by my side.

Even though I blamed you for this suffering, you still stay by my side.

Oh God, my savior,

I have apology countless time for my sin

For hating, blaming, and abandoning you.

Oh God,

How was I so blind to have not notices these wonderful gift you have given me.

You have given me a family who cared about me,

A place which I can call home,

Friends who love me for who I am.

Oh God, You are not just my God but my friend

Because like a friend you are always there for me,

Listening to my problem,

Save my countlesstmefom sin,

And you have never abandon me even when I abandon you.

Oh God, my savior,

You are important to me, And for that I will always kept you in my heart.

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As you can tell my name is really unique, well that's because its Hebrew. It means beloved and friendly, and another thing it's a boy name, I'm a girl. To be honest I have never written a poem, so my poem may suck, but it actually felt nice to try something new other than drawing. Yeah I'm an art major, I am majoring in Visual Development. I am currently enroll in West Hills College, by Fall 2016, I will transfer to Academy of Art University. By the way, I am 20 years old, if you were to ever to meet me in person, you would never believe I'm 20. Well that's because I look about the age of 13 to 15 years of age. I have a lot of funny yet sad moments of being short and looking young.

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