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My Sins


I stare in the mirror

the devil stares back

Laughing and sneering

his taunting attack

 

“I bought you, I own you

now run, try to hide

Your soul has been mortgaged

your spirit is mine”

 

I run to the yard

and come back with a brick

At the silvery glass

I throw and then kick

 

The pieces all splatter

and smash on the floor

As a roar can be heard

from the rafters and more

 

A fire has started

the attic ablaze

With bats in the air

the demon is raised

 

I reach in my shirt

for the cross round my neck

For my Grandmother’s promise

to preserve and protect …

 

And the heat that it carries

burns bright in my hand

As I point it aloft

at the horns and demand ...

 

“A Rosary upon you

return to your cave

My faith is restored

— my sins he forgave”

 

(Villanova Pennsylvania: May, 2017)

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Kurt Philip Behm

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Blends personal spiritual struggle with abstract good-vs-evil conflict.

SparseMeasureDense

Dense narrative with multiple vivid images and plot turns per section.

DarkSentimentBright

Dark conflict but resolves toward triumph and spiritual redemption.

StillEnergyExplosive

Explosive action verbs: throw, kick, splatter, roar, blaze, demand.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 28 lines; falls in 16-30 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphor, personification, vivid imagery; highly ornamented language.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric first-person but dramatic confrontation with persona of devil.

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