My State of Mind

Tue, 06/18/2013 - 16:53 -- tsukasa

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77090
United States
30° 0' 42.75" N, 95° 26' 46.7952" W

There are many ways to say
I hate you,
Let me count the ways,
I detest you, I despise you,
I loathe you,
I abhor you.

Why do you hate?
Let me think,
Maybe it's your race,
or your religion,
maybe it's your inclination.

Maybe I just hate you,
Yes! That's' it,
I just deeply, despise you,
Nay! You say!
You think my mind is twisted,
You think I'm not thinking straight,

Ha, ha, ha!
I laugh at the notion,
In which you out so much emotion,
You think I'm unconscious,
But I say nay!
I am sane, perfectly sane.

I am so sane,
That the word is merely an understatement,
So yes I hate you,
Reason - I need none,
Because if I must despise something,
You are the perfect one.

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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