My story.
You can make a time machine translater. You can make an ufo translater material flying machine. The Ufo translater translates strong special earth space energy. It turns it into a flying machine room flying machine.
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Abstract futuristic concepts (time machines, UFOs) mixed with personal wonder.
High density of speculative ideas compressed into few lines.
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