My World

Location

32068
United States
30° 4' 12.0648" N, 81° 53' 16.7568" W

Look at my world and what do you see?
The open ocean staring back at me,
Where the sun no longer shines on the fish,
But the pretty little people who dream and wish,
Where the water on the dunes is gone,
Missing for just a little too long,
The brilliant, the white, the silky sand,
That at one time carried all the land,
When you look at my world what do you see?
A young world a lot like me.

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SDangerfield

I hope you like it

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