Mysterious Object

November 4, 2012

Delicate yet stable, precious like a pair of diamonds. Hues that immediately capture the eye; colors that leaves one blind. How can something be so beautiful? Maybe there is no exact explanation for such a mystery. Petals so precious; colors so exotic. Leaving one breathless, with no nerve left in the body. A flower, that can make a woman fall in love in seconds. A flower that leaves its scent anywhere it goes. How can flower be so beautiful? It's a mystery that I never want to figure out. Let me fall in love with a mystery so predictable yet so complicated.

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ktlawlesNov 5, 2012

Hey just wanted to tell you that I quite liked your poem. It was cool how it expressed a certain thought rather than a poetic form or rhyme, and the content was very explicit as to the way you feel towards the "object" and it's universal truths. So yeah thanks for writing it!

lgmenaNov 4, 2012

This is one of my first actual poems that I feel confident about! Comments are welcomed!