Need

March 9, 2016

The scorching rays

distorting my vision

The dessert is trying

but I can still see you

The dry breeze

steaming against Me

The loss of feeling

The dessert is trying

But I can still feel you

Nothing to do

The dessert is brings lone

It is trying

I only need you

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ajshingoMar 9, 2016

<p>My current state of mind of reality in the form of a poem.</p>

ajshingoMar 9, 2016

<p>Well, here is my poem. I am not much of a poet, but this is a direct perception of my current thought and state of mind with another person. </p>