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The New Me


When lost in the deepest river

of darkness, rain, and tears

I let my sadness overwhelm me

and gave all power to my fears

 

I was under the shifting current

My eyes were blind to any guiding lights

I had nothing to secure me in my weakness

I had no one to help me win any of my fights

 

When I tried to find meaning in my battle

Small twigs grasped me and cut into my skin

I thought it would lead me to the straight and narrow

but instead it pulled me down and deeper in

 

All those twigs, they kept pulling on me

I was so tired and unsure of how to find the sun

But when I thought my life was over

I saw His hand, and I knew He was the One

 

He saved my life and rescued me

from all the pain and confusion

I decided to devote myself to You

And that is my faithful conclusion

 
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burleyn1

I have a rough past and many mistakes that I regret. I am now a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints and I am a whole new person. I love my Heavenly Father for all He has done and all He continues to do. I hope that my past and my present will help others see that there IS HOPE.

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