New Strive

July 31, 2013

This achievement is not alone mine

Credit goes to all who really felt fine

On learning about another feather in my cap

I deserved this distinct though after a long gap

The road to the hilltop was not at all straight

I had to stand all downfalls till signalled by fate

Times when the flame of hope was blowing out

Against my invincible self slowly grew a doubt

Some corners seethed with disbelief and envy

Yet another lot had forgot the general courtesy

Concern I do have for them loaded with sympathy

When shall you beak comparing and become happy?

Now that the struggle to establish has ended

My desire to excel in this field has not faded

With great power comes responsibility they say

Laced with next strive is arriving the new day

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