Night

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77478
United States
29° 37' 6.6756" N, 95° 36' 32.4036" W

I gave the sun a fiery kiss
The entire planetary orbit aligned on my lips
Like a precious stone
Shining over a poisoned land
Each morning, I'd climb to him
Clouds in hand
No feeling on Earth could surely compare
When my lover and I are in the air
But one brisk night, I surely did not miss
The cold, pale moon stealing my fiery kiss

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